Broken

How could you just walk around

With your head held high

Just you doin' that makes my heart cry

For what you did is so cruel

To make it worse it was in front of the whole school

Don't come back now

It's too late

'Cause god has already chosen your fate

Yeah you say now you were just jokin' But your too late

I'm already BROKEN

Reviews

[BLACKCRUSH]

I feel the pain in this poem so deeply , I wish you would have elaborated a little more on what exactly happen to you. Some of my favorite lines were " with your head held high
just you doin' makes my heart cry"
People can be so cruel....her head held high is a way for acknowledge what she did wrong. I think you expressed the emotions very clearly in this poem. Well done.

[Shelby Baker]

Its a good poem. This is a short poem but it gets its point across. you have very differnt poems and styles of writing it seems and you hit each poem the right way.