to Live for that... One Day

Noble

Brave

Wise

Humble

All of which One possesses

nothing can compare

laying down it all

for sin

for us

we are

nothing

we are not

wise

noble

brave

or

humble

we pretend 

our lives

unfulfilled 

until one day

the man who created it all

the man who

broke our chains

set us free

one day it will come

and we may have a chance 

to become

aspire 

to be

noble 

wise 

humble

and brave 

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

A touching write from the soul...very inspiring...He does bring light and joy for those who believe...He gave love to sinners, such as, thieves and prostitute, etc...and laid it all on the line against the establishment at that time...I think if he were to visit, they would treat him like a hippy...anyhoo, even in this world of sin, we can strive to be like him even if its unattainable, but in the end, God judges us all in our moral standings. Nice write.

[Alessander]

hmmmm...I think everyone, except for psychopaths, strives for goodness, the problem is that no one can agree definitively what constitutes "Goodness", "Nobility" "Wisdom", and even if the definition becomes clear, they're still so damn hard to attain and maintain in this world! lol

I like the sentiment behind this piece.