Precious Blossom

tears tears

everywhere

smiles smiles

not enough

each petal

each blossom

we are each unique

created

special

we all have a purpose

yet we live in a world

each petal

crushed 

under the weight

under the sorrow

too much pain

too little sunshine

petals

blossom

bloom

we are each flowers

seeking love

seeking attention

needing

what some may never know

except for the day 

when we reach the love

the beginning and the end

as He reaches down picks us up and allows us to bloom

we are created 

to bloom

to blossom 

to be 

Precious

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Lovely poem...yes, life is full of sorrows and a glimpse of happiness...I truly enjoyed the metaphor, that one's life is flower blooming in a spring sunny day...to blossom and grow...and hopefully serve a purpose in this life.

[Poetry child]

very pretty, n very spiritual...

[Chris]

Thought-full and wistful.

[I Shred This Cabbage]

beautiful. delicious flow and slightly usual structure make for an interest read

[Wolfwind]

This was beautiful. Full of emotion and a sense of eternal devotion to a higher power. It blooms hope into existence as we can see that in the end, all will be okay, as that is the ultimate destiny.

Great Ink!
Aaron