Kiss of Nothing

Can you tell when it's your last?

Are there signs?

Maybe 

I’m blind

or just stupid

Missing

that moment

where our lips met

I didn’t realize it was our last

I would have kept it on my lips

I had been used to quick and often

If I would have 

or

Could have 

known

I would not have been able to let your lips leave mine

I would have super glued mine to yours

Only to get a laugh 

of my childish act

I can’t remember which kiss was our last

Was it filled with the bitterness that your goodbye held?

Was it a last attempt to see if there was a magic, a spark

to want you to make this work

or 

Was it nothing 

Nothing

that you say 

that I was 

that I am 

to 

You...?

Reviews

[Erin]

Good..I enjoyed it

[koty bell]

absolutely beautifally brilliant i have felt these emotions and feelings several times in relationships idk guess its cuz i fall in love to easily wear my heart on my sleeve anyways great write add me

[I Shred This Cabbage]

Beautiful. An elegy to lost love. But still somehow hopeful.

[DebiCoco]

A. Louise you never cease to amaze me. These words are light, yet filled with emotion.

[Muse]

I would not have been able to let your lips leave mine
I would have super glued mine to yours

clever penning. :)

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

Loved the
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[Daniel DeLorez]

Beautiful. :) Very touching. In the first line, "its" should be "it's" and I don't quite understand the line "to want you to make this work"

Still, a wonderful poem filled with emotion. :)

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

so romantic , tender and a bit sad .... we never know when its the last kiss , last goodbye , before we left alone xx Yossi

[Andrea]

Wonderful!! Sad but rings so true. I really like this but the parts that I think are most special are those questions about what the kiss meant - bitterness, a last attempt to find the spark, or nothing?

[Kyle]

Nice picture too. I am very visual so those things really matter to some of us....