Just ask to dance?

dance with me. take my hand.

unleash the energy inside of me

kiss me, overflow

your eyes

melt our bodies

into one

and all

just ask to dance?

across the room, don’t just stay

your eyes meander

let your body follow

there take my lips and make them yours...

Reviews

[fireblossom]

Nice poem. It stopped me with interest.

[SOUL LESS]

Nice flow...and nice imagery. Like it.

[Alex Zynder]

this is one of those poems i really like, though i can't precisely say why. maybe its the pace or the choice of words, but the topic and flow go together perfectly.

[solo2be]

I really like the way this poem flows and the imagery in it. Great write.