Wake up my Torn Rose

When have you ever gotten something taken from you?

All that happens to me

All is mine

All is yours

No consideration

No respect

           You do Do

Thinking the one above is with you

You crack at the slightest negativity

Comforted always

Poor little Rose

So fragile

Glass

Never shattered

Makes no sense

You live in a world

No negative

No drama

No pain

No heart aches

Oh How nice that must be

Just once

I want you to learn

You can’t get everything you want

Just once

I want you to wake up

Wake up

Into this

Harsh but oh so real world

Filled With

Lies

Bitterness

Deceit

Unhappiness

Pain

This world that I know All too well…

Reviews

[Nina Kari]

i love your writing style it makes me think of out of control thought processes. a thought here, a thought there. but it still makes sense you know? i can tell your words are from the heart. you've been through pain. its...emotional and understandable, relatable.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Some people think that the world revolves around them and their problems not realizing the pain they cause loved ones with their neglect... the coloring of the words made it hard to read but the poem is great.