I am.

I am.

A Poem by A

I am  a palette of the rainbow

I am a curtain ending the day

I am an owl in the midnight breeze

I am the line separating incoming and outgoing

I am the energy of an explosion above the serene blue waters of Lake Okoboji

I am a polka dot bikini sprawled on the wooden dock

I am the passion between lovers dipping in the bliss

I am a summer shower cleansing a dancer flying through the phases of growing up

I am an orange crushed under the hands of time

I am a blade of grass being cut beneath the pain

I am a journey of hello and goodbye

 

© 2010 A


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dipping in the bliss...what an astounding turn of phrase...a mature write of a talented young writer

Posted 14 Years Ago


yeah, i really like your style. This is fantastic! I am.....great lines, it moved my soul...."I am a journey of hello and goodbye"......love that line....

Posted 14 Years Ago


Anna, this was pretty great.
Many good lines here.
I am a pallette of a rainbow, reminds me or a poem I wrote.

I am a journey of hello and goodbye.
I liked that!

Antonio


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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