Surroundings --> Broken --> Gone

To change

good?

bad. horrible. hatred.

branches out

leaf by leaf

miss

            familiar

            loving

            comfort

Forgotten

            Failed

                        Left

            Past

                        Home

                        Friends

                        Family

Change

            So little time

            So few reasons

            House. A building

            School. A clock          

Tick Tock

            People. Envelop in problems and gossip

            Surroundings. Negative, yelling,

Beat Beat

Beat Me

Hold me

Hold me

No

Ruthless Change

Houseà Change

School à Change

Friendà Change

Familyà Change

Thoughts for Happiness

Just falling.

Coming down

Deeper

Deeper

Down

Into a depression

Your mind

Wanders

Laughter surrounds you

Is it you?

Now

Ever

Fall again

Into memories

Once was

And remembrance

I would

And

Will

Give anything

To go back to

A day

Any day

Even a bad day

A day with

Screams, Cuss words

Slicing the air

Blows

Sending me sliding across the floor

Any day with pressures

With joy

With familiar

Comfort

 

Please one day

To go back…

 

…But I know if I go this time

 I will never leave…

 

Reviews

[nostal]

Very good, and unique. I really like the last line.
Good job.