being alive... on Life support...?

being alive... on Life support...?

A Poem by A

Breeze...

                     carries me..

                    breathes through my hair...

   My hair... blonde.... shorter... brushes upon my skin..

                 Tingles...  Teases.. my back.. my shoulders..

    my bare skin... hands... the tips of my hair... running along my skin...

Not dead.. Not unmoving...

             Alive... Moving... Breathing... Being..

 

My bike... My life support...

          The only thing...

      I wake up for..

            The only thing...

  keeps me breathing...

      keeps me.... Alive

 

© 2009 A


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Very beautiful and it has a nice flow. Also thank you for the review...

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Posted 15 Years Ago


Very nicely penned, great write.

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Added on February 26, 2009

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