Summer Love

Summer Love....

Anticipation arised in my heart....

When he pulled up in that old green truck I got in hoping we would never part

That warm summer night was full of our luck 

His coffee brown eyes melted the skies

At that moment, he had me from “hello”

I knew now we could never say our good-byes

You were mine from the start, you are my fellow 

We drove away… mind set… never coming back

Our fingers interlocked… hearts connected

I knew now that my heart would never lack

Not looking back my heart felt protected 

We were united in each other’s hearts

One for one and finally one for all

Made up of different layers and parts

Not wanting the real truth to make us fall 

Thoughts ran through my mind in a total bliss

Looking at each other we gave a kiss 
 
 
 
 
 

 

Reviews

[Hoshi Nami]

i feel like this really is the epitome of summer love: short and sweet. i'm going to be a total girl and say this really reminded me of the notebook by nicholas sparks so a big bravo!
-hoshi

[Kiara]

loved it!
especially the beginning
sweet adorable
and heartfelt
thank you for sharing!
-arabella

[Wildecat]

Short sweet and a wonderful love poem, I liked this a lot.

[Lina Lynn]

Simple and sweet and great. I liked it a lot. There was something comforting about it.

[Meradee]

Love starts out simple. You captured this beginning nicely.
Pepper...