The Burn Deep Within The Pain

The Burn Deep Within The Pain

A Poem by A

As the pain

Surges

Taking its course

Left

Right

Cutting through the muscle

Coursing through the veins

Holding everything

You know

Deep

Deep

Down

Concealing the pain

That seems to

Take over your days

Absorb your

Minutes

Cancel the love

Feel the pain

Take it in

Let it out

Feel the burn

Feel the pain

© 2013 A


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Wisdom exceeding what I would expect from someone so young...Your writing is very mature, which tells me you are beyond your years with talent and experience. Fascinating. I look forward to reading your other works:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on January 21, 2013
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London, England, United Kingdom



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