Love Sonnet XXXVIII

....how we met

Love Sonnet XXXVIII

 

 

An Eastern glow awakened me.

As I stepped outside, gave morning

blessings to the 4 directions,

sipped my coffee, strong, black

 

and reached for a new day. Today

was my trip to Bear Ear, the Valley

of the Gods, to speak with

the hataalii who lived near there.

 

As I walked along the trail, a breeze

blew dust and sage weed across the path,

making me remember the way you

 

came into my life all blustery,

yet full of harmony and deep

mystery, enticing my kindred spirit.

 

Aztec Warrior / redzone 3.21.2025    

Author's Note

....thank you for reading..

Reviews

[ETERNITY]

Oh, this is truly a Love Story I am eager to crawl into.
Yes, I see the vision taking shape . . .
https://youtu.be/APU14LsiyR8?si=oqGQdyEy3oqf68TK

[jacob erin-cilberto]

When someone comes to our life like this, we can only hope that the magic will never relent.
j.

[redzone]

like that breeze, the magic she brought, died down, she left, leaving me dusty and alone.
read morelike that breeze, the magic she brought, died down, she left, leaving me dusty and alone.

Thank you Jacob, your comment reminds me to hold on to that magic for as long as you can.

[Beren]

After learning the story who you write these, this poems has even more meaning anymore.
This is such a sweet story, made me believe in love… this is one of my favorites too

[redzone]

Thank you Beren, I appreciate your very kind words on this poem.