Love Sonnet XXXVI

Love Sonnet XXXVI

 

 

At the break of day, we

awake from dreams, dreamers

dream of lemon drop kisses,

skin, suntanned glistening that

 

wears earth tones as fresh and

alive as flowers grown in moonlight

reflection. Once, my love, you held my

hand to your breast, “feel my heart

 

beat, listen to the way my

breath tickles your goosebumps

with warmth, and my words

 

flavor your tongue with poetry.

“My love, you flow in my veins,

and I eat you like Spring air.”

 

Aztec Warrior / redzone 2.21.25

Author's Note

....thanks for reading

Reviews

[ETERNITY]

Your interpretation of life is amazing, lemon drop kisses sound so sweet and irresistible This way of life I know is real but seems as if it's all just a smokey dream. The romance threaded throughout gives it all a tint of beauty, Warrior. I am intrigued, and a little envious, really. I was raised a good part in the city with a few smatterings of life in the country which were really the outskirts. The language is beautiful. I wonder are you translating from Navajo?

[redzone]

My poetry, much like yours, is fantasy, imagination, but comes also from my life experiences, both good and bad. I have read about a lot of different cultures, and I appreciate the mythos of the Navajo, their belief that there must be balance in the world.

I am unable to translate from the Navajo language into english unless I use a computer translator app. But I have not tried to do this, even though I have used a few Navajo words within a poem. This is also true of Spanish.

I too am a city boy, born and raised. Though right now, I live in a small town in PA. Finally, being in love can be beautiful, but it is up to us to find that love and beauty.

[ETERNITY]

So romantic, it's almost taboo to share
But so glad you did.

[Beren]

damn how sweet! I felt like I ate the emotions and then listened to them successfully as if you had described exactly what I tasted. Honest and intense feelings and cleverr explanation.
“My love, you flow in my veins,
and I eat you like Spring air." woahh

[redzone]

Thank you so much, Beren. I appreciate your kind words and the "woahh". ;0)

[Beren]

My pleasure sir