Love Sonnet XXVIII

...looking for future people.

Love Sonnet XXVIII

 

 

Love is a gamble, a roll

of the dice. Lucky Seven emerges

on the felt needs that

determine a coincidental meeting

 

and inspires a desire to feel

the depths of you, to

know your dreams and

wishes for a world unfettered,

 

where human beings look upon

each other with understanding,

a respect for the beauty of colors.

 

Come, my love, take my hand, let’s

roll the dice, ahead lies

a future world, a world of liberation.

 

Aztec Warrior / redzone 1.2.2025

 

(Note: It’s a scientific fact, we do not

have to live this way.)

Author's Note

....thanks for reading

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Rolling the dice of love is always a gamble but typically one worth the chance. I love the wording and the emotion put into the poem

[redzone]

agreed, well worth the chance, and who knows, might even lead to something wonderful. Thank you for your kind words and for the visit.

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome

[ETERNITY]

Hi Aztec, I am on the second Love Sonnet as I have decided to read a Love Sonnet per day.
I love your little PS "We don't have to live this way."
I don't know what we can DO besides the opposite of what we've been doing.
Enjoy life and try to avoid wasting our resources.
At least you are one person trying to do things differently. Great Write!

[Sami Khalil]

Woozy woo
An excellent reminder of what love is, what it stands for, what joy it brings.
I hope your investment and invitation to her pay off handsomely.

[redzone]

Thank you, my poet friend!! She is a metaphor for anyone, everyone who feels the same. Come, we have work to do to make the world and ourselves better, more humane.

It is always a pleasure to read your generous "woozy woo" reviews Sami. Hope you are well and happy!!

[Sami Khalil]

Hehehe
I agree wholeheartedly
You are welcome sir Redzone.