Love Sonnet (Part 2)

.... continuing the reply

Love Sonnet XXI (Part 2)

 

 

There, in the light of starbursts

you stood, Jupiter glistened in

your hair and Mars twinkled

in your eyes, while your

 

skin reflected the moon and

Venus was heard on your tongue.

You spoke in Europa’s icy words

of Plains and frozen seas, where

 

Time, seen as an arrow’s flow,

whispered the secrets of nebula

and cosmic collisions, creating the

 

elements of life spread throughout

the galaxies. There, in the threads of entanglement,

my lips met yours in chaotic harmony.

 

Aztec Warrior / redzone 11.23.24

Author's Note

...thanks for reading

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

'Out of this world ' writing, metaphorically and literally.
You imaginations has gravity pulling at ideas.
Wow!

[redzone]

Hi Sami. Fortunately, my imagination has those NASA super boosters and it takes off for the stars. You would be surprised at how many ideas you can find in the Milky Way, it's like a gazillion. But I think you know all this already since your imagination never fails dear poet!

Thanks for the review and here's a WOW back!!!

[Sami Khalil]

Hehe he. I agree wholeheartedly dear poet and friend.
Here is a good title for you:
A Milky Way Rendezvous

[Pryde Foltz]

SOOO nice. I am sucker for a good space write. I am going to do it ... no I won't ... yep ... I will. This poem is out of the world:)

[redzone]

ooooh groan!!! ;o)
I'm glad you did Pryde. So, I'm planning to take a ride to the stars, do yopu want to join me Pryde?? Garanteed to knock your socks off. We will take a left at Mars and then head straight to the Galactic core, travelling into Sgr A the black hole and emerge out into another dimension!! What say you Pryde??!!

[Pryde Foltz]

I am waiting for them to master artificial gravity; then ask me again:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

What a great oxymoron...."in chaotic harmony"----

Pleasantly perturbing....

[redzone]

yep, that kiss was very perturbing!!
Thanks Jacob, for stopping by.