Love Sonnet XV

Love Sonnet XV

A Poem by redzone
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Love Sonnet XV

 

 

Guitar and Talking Drum sing

while Healers massage the earth

with fingers of sand and

herbs, created images and

 

signs to repel spirits,

the witches of dark winds.

All night the ceremony of blessing continued,

welcoming a new dawn, and

 

while the mysticism of powers given

by the Elders, who came first

to this land, worked.

 

These wanderers rode

star dust, blown by solar winds,

and kissed your Flor d’Luna lips.

 

Aztec Warrior / redzonw 10.28.2024


© 2024 redzone


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redzone
....thank you for reading

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Hi fellow writer!
After seeing Love Sonnet XV posted as a side view, I decided to click it as I'm right now into "love" pieces.
Sonnets are unfamiliar to me but I thought I'd try to learn about God's (Flor d’Luna ?) as one friend seems to be an expert in that aspect.
I was surprised by the Santana music! I love Santana but am into more of his tunes like Smooth.
Thanks for schooling me in some things I was ignorant to!

Posted 1 Week Ago


redzone

1 Week Ago

Hi GlendaK, thanks for stopping by and taking the time to leave a kind comment. I am glad you found .. read more
GlendaK

1 Week Ago

I really hoped to expound on your poesy, it was spirits and witches and dark winds...All the things .. read more
GlendaK

1 Week Ago

herbs.....
The religious mysticism you've penned here makes for an engaging read, Curt. Your sonnets are always top notch, impressive and awe-inspiring. One of these days, I will try my hand at one. Well, maybe!

Posted 1 Week Ago


redzone

1 Week Ago

Kelly, I would love to read a sonnet you create, please, give it a go!!!

I am always.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

1 Week Ago

So dear of you to say. Thank you, my friend!
Tremendous work. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


redzone

1 Week Ago

Thank you Thomas, for your kind words and visit!!
Loving the nature adoration and mystical element to this write. It is superb.



Posted 3 Weeks Ago


redzone

1 Week Ago

and I am loving your review, Pryde!! Thank you!!
I find the mystery of this culture so interesting, and actually very real and believable...
where the heart and mind are willing to go, we may just go along for the ride.
j.

Shame there are no reviews on this piece.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


redzone

1 Week Ago

there are now 4 (includes yours) reviews and a whopping 65 views on this poem Jacob. Perhaps this is.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

1 Week Ago

It's not that. I review a lot and others do, but so many just look at the poems but never leave comm.. read more

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Added on October 28, 2024
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