Love Sonnet XIV

....Willow Creek singing

Love Sonnet XIV

 

 

I can remember, over and over,

combing your hair with my fingers,

its softness of red

tickling my heart.

 

There was an earthy feel

as you turned to face the morning sun,

singing to the 4 directions

of your womanly presence

 

as the flow of Willow Creek

spoke in riddles to the trees,

deer, and chickadees,

 

who would come, drink the wildness

and aroma caught

in the melody of your song.

 

Aztec Warrior / redzone 10.21.2024

Author's Note

....thanks for reading.

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

very heartwarming. the first line was really moving. "over and over" it's such a simple and subtle way to say "i love you."