Distant Galaxies

Distant Galaxies

A Poem by redzone
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....and here we are

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Distant Galaxies

 

 

The day was cold,

bitter, but clear,

as a blue sky talked to the earth,

with a Winter’s sun.

Sitting on the porch,

Listening to Willow Creek’s flow,

I’m warmed by my morning brew

As the dream began.

 

I dreamt I could see

in infrared.

See when time began

in a universe

where stars were still in bed,

asleep, before space cooled,

and atoms formed.

 

It was a time of great chaos,

yet contained the seeds of life,

cosmic life,

the evolution of everything

we see today.

 

On the back of Turtle,

and Grandmother’s breath,

our world was born.

In this time of grand beginnings,

we humans,

spoke to the stars.

 

Aztec Warrior/redzone 1.12.24


© 2024 redzone


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redzone
....thank you for reading

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I wish we could evolute today...there is so much chaos...and love and brotherhood is moving more slowly than a giant tortoise who has no urgency to move faster.
Such a shallow world...where is the caring, where is the purpose....striving for something instead of attacking, attacking, attacking.
such a powerful write...great imagery within the shell of this.

j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


redzone

1 Month Ago

Jacob, your words hold so much truth and I am appreciative of you finding this poem and leaving your.. read more

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