Oh, I like this one a lot, Curt. You set the scene so perfectly. Yes, men and women can be friends and share lively conversations about shared interests. Panera bread is a fine place to meet....just as Starbuck's is. It does not matter that she is married. She is not cheating by having a cup of coffee with you and just sharing ideas and words. A very "nice" poem with a homey feeling. Lydi**
I must say, as I sip a cup of hot tea as aid to a scratchy throat, that I found this piece of well written Poetry very enjoyable as the picture you painted to page purt near caused me to envision the interior of Panera's as though, somehow, I had been there before ... Most majestically, though, I was touched by the understanding and compassionate mannerisms of a man who has learned that one does not have to touch a Woman in order to touch or move her heart, be her true friend and companion ... Thus, I must say a bit more: You have penned a thought provoking piece that should and could change the lives of those who do listen to your inner voice ...
Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham (A Different Breed of Moderate)
Friendship, two amazing artists discussing the written and the visual, the warm, cozy place with a hot beverage, an inviting fireplace. Wow!
You should write a short story for it will be wonderful and inspirational. You are multi-talented Curt.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
she is an amazing artist, Sami.... her paintings and poetry are wondrous and it is a pleasure to kno.. read moreshe is an amazing artist, Sami.... her paintings and poetry are wondrous and it is a pleasure to know her.... so, thank you, Sami, it means a lot, your visits and words especially since you are also an amazing poet and human being....
this poem is the epitome of loving who you love...and acceptance that should be just
second nature....but unfortunately is not.
You are such a compassionate person, Curt...it shows in your writing and in your reviews to others' writing...
and you have a passion for writing that makes your poems so real.
j.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
your words touch me Jacob, thank you!!! to be seen in a positive way by a fellow poet, also a compas.. read moreyour words touch me Jacob, thank you!!! to be seen in a positive way by a fellow poet, also a compassionate and accepting human being, is a wonderful feeling Jacob...
as an aside, my friend has begun painting again and now has several of her paintings in juried art shows and some galleries.... she paints in a contemporary abstraction style and is quite good in my opinion and it is great that she is being recognized for her talents... I am planning on going to her more recent showing as I have only seen photos of her art and want to see the real paintings up close and personal...