A Poem

… found in one of my notebooks...

A Poem

 

oo0oo

 

Dream like, innuendo breathes deep

moving slowly in a heart beat.

And then you said, ‘Hi’.

Reality

flowed quickly from a dream.

 

What is a dream

but a shadow roaming the mind.

Illusive, like fire in a red dress

dancing bare foot to music

only you can hear.

 

And then you said, ‘Hi’.

 

oo0oo

 

~~redzone 6.9.09

Author's Note

.... thanks for reading..

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is cool...reminds me of my youth...and the crush i had on this certain girl, never imagining in a million years she would notice me...then she said "hi"---

needless to say...i was totally inept, and speechless...
ah chances lost..oo0oo no.

[redzone]

thanks Jacob, ah, those youthful days when we were too shy and had crushes every other day but were afraid to speak.... I like where this poem took you Jacob...