A Poet's Page

.... waiting in shadows...

A Poet’s Page

 

Search the wind for shadows,

perhaps there you will find me

if you so please.

The sky will be a poet’s page

but it is only in the wind

you can find the shadow of me.

Paint me with stars

or with blue,

then place the moon

in a blackened scene

so that my shadow can hide

waiting for you to find me

and etch your name on my page.

I am there, waiting

for you on the wind

by the sea.

 

Aztec Warrior/redzone  4.3.17

Author's Note

...thanks for reading...

Reviews

[costa siwale]

Incredible imagination in this one...well written

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Curt... some things you just feel when the sky like eagles fly in melodies of secret rendezvous nights when waves with moonlight caress the page in turbulent delight. truly, Pat

[Paul]

Wonderful imagery throughout this poem. I enjoyed reading this poem from start to finish. Nicely done!

Paul

[Shweta]

I loved reading it...a wonderland kinda experience !!! Thanks for sharing

[Surya]

Searching and waiting in the wind..whole imagery was apt...
And I enjoyed it...:)

[Paper]

Very haunting. Especially the part about "etching" a name.

And I've been thinking a lot about your comment about this handle I've chosen.

[redzone]

thanks paper... for your comment and visit... you chose a good handle I think... as a friend once said "write on"...

[MsJewel]

You have given the reader some lovely images to enjoy, which I love. More than that though, I love the soft feeling of this one Curt - it is almost like floating in a dream. So beautiful. :) Julie

[redzone]

Julie, I am thrilled you found this poem beautiful and dream lie... especially since you my poet friend write such wonderfully rich dreamy poetry... your visits are always welcomed and appreciated as are you...

[Lydia Shutter]

A delightful concept....you playing hide and seek with the man on the moon. Words floating in another dimension till they become "real" because someone reads them. To wait on the wind by the sea.....such a lovely thought. To hear the sound of the waves lapping against the shoreline and feel the breeze kissing your face. Ahhhh....very nice, Curt. Lydi**

[redzone]

thanks Lydi... I love being found in the wind by the sea... its a good place to be with a special person, love...

[Papaya]

A poets page, I love the idea here.
So many possibilities. Much like reaching for the sky and stars, we write out our dreams. Very cool.

[redzone]

thanks Ana, glad you liked... it was written on the wind inside a shadow and on a whim ;0)

[Papaya]

That makes total sense to me. :)

[redzone]

I am sure you have written many poems doing the same thing or in the same way... you are a poet and there is no better page... ;0)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this reminds me of someone on this site...a tribute...love it.

j.

[redzone]

interesting where you took this poem Jacob, wasn't intended as tribute to anyone, but I am curious as to who the poem reminded you of if you don't mind telling... thanks for your comment

redzone