Simple Words

Simple Words

A Poem by redzone
"

...to often we hide our words....

"

Simple Words

 

the other day

you talked with me,

simple words, wrapped in a simple song,

yet they spoke to me,

leading a clear way,

a path of no return out of this maze.

~~~

they were magical words

formed by your whispering breath

caressing each vowel

and syllable

as they passed your lips.

~~~

I heard you

and thought

this must be the way Neruda

felt while walking

the sands of his Isla Negra

hand in hand with Delia

before the winds raged,

before she went away.

~~~

I savor these words

you leave me,

their grittiness

silences my tongue

with the fire of your heart

and I want more.

more of you

of these words

flavored by your lips;

more of your syllables and vowels

wrapped around your

simple song.

 

Aztec Warrior/redzone  4.1.17

© 2017 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
...thanks for reading...


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This is so beautiful and romantic, I love it.
Nice nod to Neruda too. A+

Posted 7 Years Ago


redzone

7 Years Ago

wait.. an A+, that must have been a "gritty" A+ cause silence has grabbed my tongue.. thank you Ana... read more
Papaya

7 Years Ago

Silence? You? That's a first.
redzone

7 Years Ago

I am trying here but ... ouch.. it hurts to be silent...
It's the "simple songs" that stay with us. The ones that fill the pregnant pauses with a smile, a touch, a feeling. The songs that we want to remember, we HAVE to remember, we MUST remember....and the ones that we can never hear often enough. Such a romantic write, Curt.....you have a romantic soul and it is very "nice". Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


redzone

7 Years Ago

Lydi, did you see that A+ that Ana gave me... I have gotten A's before but never an A+... I told her.. read more
Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

You are never silenced....I know that! :) And, Curt? No such thing as being too kind!
simply put....so romantic...and simply love flowing from every syllable of this.
j

Posted 7 Years Ago


redzone

7 Years Ago

yes, simple... ;0) but my thanks is a bit complex and laird with appreciation for your words and vis.. read more
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This is very sensual
and lovely
Thanks for sharing this beautiful work

Posted 7 Years Ago


redzone

7 Years Ago

and thank you for sharing your thoughts and comment SoloSolace, nice of you to visit..

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Added on April 2, 2017
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