Falling Into Discord In B Flat Minor

Falling Into Discord In B Flat Minor

A Poem by redzone
"

....discord is always a fun place to be....

"

Falling Into Discord In B Flat Minor

 

This poem is in discord,

a confusion of dissonant feelings

pulled together in a blue daze,

a piano, cello and violin rhapsody

played in B flat minor.

 

This poem is only an echo,

a lost violin screech as bow strings snap

in twilight’s shadow.

Melody’s requiem sings, for

I have died everyday

waiting for you to find me

walking along this beach of soft sand

listening to the language of moon beams

as they whisper hope

from harmonic cello and violin.

 

At times,

just as darkness

begins its journey into light,

I feel you;

feel your heart bow the strings

and I follow you into the shadows,

into the labyrinth

of your concerto,

into a B flat minor movement that

can only be called sublime

and I am falling.

 

Falling into a look,

a word,

or even this melody

caught on the wind

that begins back in

Stonehenge time but blows through

my hair today

tickling its intentions

and allowing me to hear

your voice sing

those ancient mesmerizing runes.

 

This melody calls

I am falling

and can feel its warmth

as I walk alone,

along on this beach of soft sands,

listening to moon beams

reflect your violin songs.

 

Aztec Warrior/redzone  3.6.17

© 2017 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
....thanks for reading...


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Velvety soft musically romantic words...pianissimo. mezzo piano and climaxing in risoluto! Not just music, but the sand, moonbeams, and that fantasy woman....ahhh....just a wonderful rhapsody. Very "nice", Curt. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on March 9, 2017
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