Being Human

A Poem by redzone

....getting old sucks, unless you "get jiggy with it"

Being Human

(some thoughts)

it is strange living among older people,

watching the daily struggle

for life

in a world

where loneliness lurks in every shadow;

where death is greedy

and commonplace.

II.

it is strange living among older people,

some still enjoying life

while fighting pain;

some resigned each day

will be their last.

but all know the man in Black-

Death beckons seductively.

III.

it is strange living among older people.

grey hair sparkle wisdom of ages gone by

yet alive in minds that wonder

what’s up with kids these days?

it’s not an abstract “honor” they seek,

rather the usefulness of their life experiences,

mostly learned through blood and sweat.

IV.

it is strange living among older people.

the sad shaped eyes

the humorous smiles

the antics of nothing to lose

and hope when old, I am as spry.

then this morning looking in the mirror-

ooops, an old man stares back!

Aztec Warrior/redzone 1.17.17

© 2017 redzone

Author's Note

....thanks for reading.... I realize this music is a bit strange to go with the poem, but being here for over a month, I know everyone here in their own way would love to "get jiggy with it"....

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Lydia Shutter

I relate so well with your words here, Curt. I live in an over 55 community and when I first moved in, I was not yet 50. The "old people" were interesting to watch. I knew I was far younger than they were and I knew I would never act as they did. 15 years later, though, I am one of them.....and the face that stares back at me has plenty of wrinkles. If we are fortunate, we will all be those old people one day...and we WILL get jiggy with it! :) Very nice write, my friend. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

ah Lydi, I think you would be one of those women I mentioned to Jacob below... thank you for your re.. read more

Kelly Scheppers

I remember spending time with my grandmother when I was very young, thinking that she'd live forever. Looking back upon the time now, there was so much I wish I had asked her - answers to questions that I'll never have answers to. I've already surpassed both my parents and older sister in age, so every year, every day now, is certainly a gift. I don't see it as aging anymore, now its become more of a privilege.

Your introspective writes are some of your best, Curt. I hope you are well and know you are thought of!

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

all those questions will get answered just by living your life Kelly.... and then you can pass them .. read more

Lyn Anderson

This is very good Curt, and I absolutely love the form. It is very perfect for the theme. Those eyes still sparkle ... as does your pen.

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

the style you made famous KL, yes I thought the poem fit it well.... and thank you for your words, y.. read more

Great Aunt Astri

Mirrors should be banned!!! You sound very young in spirit though, and your poem is well written and sincere.

Posted 7 Years Ago

7 Years Ago

exactly!! no mirrors allowed!! never ever!!! Thanks for reading and great review...

jacob erin-cilberto

i really like this...and am so glad i am not seeing that old person in the mirror yet...
teaching, tennis ...they really help keep me young in spirit, mind and body...although i know around one of the next corners, it will happen...and i wonder often how i will handle it.

you made me do some self-reflection...

j.