Fly

Fly

A Poem by redzone
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.... more silliness....

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Fly

 

you know I’ve

loved you since forever

girl, you know you take me higher

come on baby fly with me fly around

so why your feet still on the ground?

your love can take me hostage make me stumble and fall

“so put your arms around me baby

I just want to fly.”

 

Aztec Warrior/redzone  10.23.16

© 2016 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
...thanks for reading... thanks for understanding my silliness.. what it is, cause I just wanna fly have mercy...


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awesome concept...
if only we could fly. but it's just a thought.

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

yeah, if we could fly.. awesome!! it may just be a thought Homason, but a good one.. thanks for sto.. read more
Homason

8 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Fly me to the moon...comes to mind or how about Aladdin's magic carpet. A song of silliness but of beauty...Never too old to wish on things...:)...............

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

nope, never... thanks Sami... love those magic carpet rides... lol
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

Lol. You feel on cloud nine. You are welcome. ...:::)))...m
It's kind of a mind-blowing coincidence that I'm reading this poem of yours not too long after I sent you a song that pretty much is the soundtrack for this message. It's pretty amazing the way mojo can travel coast to coast increasing in intensity sometimes or just gathering cosmic craziness that gets imparted into the psychic s**t that flying left & right these days, if you catch my drift. To put it another way, evidently you & I have been struck with the urge to fly & I enthusiastically accept your invitation to do so (((HUGS)))

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

it's cozmic mojo magical craziness Margie... maybe Janis had it right when she said "it's all the sa.. read more
That's a very sweet poem. R xo

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

I know right... er.. I mean thanks, Rach glad you liked... ;0)
Great poem. The shape of the poem reminds me of a flying saucer.
Coincidence?? :)


Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

nope, no coincidence, it's the mother ship ready to take me away... plenty of room for friends if yo.. read more
Papaya

8 Years Ago

Ha, I love it! Send me a post card! :)
redzone

8 Years Ago

will do...

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Added on October 23, 2016
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