Ooh Aah City

Ooh Aah City

A Poem by redzone
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...just some silliness, what else...

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Ooh Aah City

It’s true,
kinda shy
and oh so cute,
I’m the boy from N.Y. City
here to make you feel fine and pretty.

I’m kinda sweet
will never miss a beat
of a wild eyed kitty
dancing to summer’s heat
cause I’m the boy from N.Y. City

And you’re the girl so fine and pretty,
young and oh so witty
stealing hearts
like a sashaying kitty
and here I am, just a boy from N.Y. City!

Ooh aah, ooh aah, let’s make romance
let me sweep you off your feet
taste your lips oh so sweet,
give me a chance my sweet kitty
to be your boy from N.Y. City.

Aztec Warrior/redzone  10.23.16

© 2016 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
...thanks for reading...
just some fun with the song and besides I am the boy from NYC and can make you feel fine and pretty, cool and witty walkin' these streets.. enjoy the song... ;0)




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WOW! WOW! And WOW! How I would love to be the person THIS sweet little ditty was written for. This is really simmering & shimmering with playfulness & creativity. Very lyrical. I can almost see you dancing down the sidewalk between sky-scrapers as you rap this to the lady in a full-circle knee-length dress, walking backwards in front of you, watching you pursue her with your incredible imagination & frisky spirit (((HUGS))) That new notebook has some special s**t goin' on . . .

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

this ditty was written for Ms Fan Tasy and she sure is pretty.. and it is actually me walking backwa.. read more
Yeah that's a whole lot a goodness. NYC is the jam! R xo

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

yes it is, I love it... a city that never sleeps... thanks Rach for your visit and kind words..
This is fun, I love it! NYC is such a cool place. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

it definitely is a fun place... if you ever get to visit, I'll hook you up with that retired dragon .. read more
If I ever find myself in NYC, I'll look you up. ; ) We'll find a band who'll think we're "smoother than a fresh jar of Skippy"!



Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

it's a date Kelly and I happen to know just the place... jar of skippy sit on every table as well as.. read more

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Added on October 23, 2016
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