Feel

A Poem by redzone

... the music of "Youth" haunts....

Feel

Her season, a sweet nectar,

the fragrance of fresh cut clover

on a Spring day.

She fills rainbows with colors.

She is…. just

arms, legs,

hair and lips,

just kisses and delight

morning, noon and night.

She is… just

Summer heat

swirling Autumn leaves

Winter’s freeze

and a Spring shower with me.

She makes me feel

Everything

In the air she breathes

I see

Everything….

I feel everything!

She is… just

my beloved.

Aztec Warrior/redzone 10.14.16

(Note: still thinking about the music in “Youth” and the movie)

© 2016 redzone

Author's Note

...thanks for reading...

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Kathy Van Kurin

Redzone,
Hi. I am new to your writing. I found this poem really nice. We cannot take the love of a committed heart lightly. so beautiful was your take on love; just eneough to remind that our hearts are lost without another heart to be with....................Blessings Kathy

Posted 8 Years Ago

barleygirl

This is a sweet song of woman worship that would tickle anyone's fancy. I love the way you weave in the seasons, along with many sensory delights. I love the attraction that can be felt from here. Yet I also love the way your story is not specific to any particular age or individual or era . . . anyone can read their own feelings & surroundings into your delightful melody (((HUGS))) Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

thank you Margie for this great review... so happy you could "feel" it... for some reason this art f.. read more

1VJ

I read this the other day but didn't have the time to review it. You had me at hello, Jerry Maguire. This is definitely a breath of springtime, a whisper of a delicate love. Although, I'm not fond of the font for that very reason, it's much too refined for something so bold.

Your poetry speaks straight to the heart, and lingers long after you've done reading. I know it does me anyway. You're batting a thousand, I know cliché but if the poetry fits. :) Simply exquisite.

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

exquisite, I like that.. lol.. and coming from Elsa (Frozen) I am also honored... my granddaughter E.. read more

Lydia Shutter

The fresh clean feel of this romantic write drew me in. Young love....the best kind. The kind we forever search for once it is gone. Filled with splendid imagery and warm emotions. So "nice", Curt. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

thank you Lydi... it is so wonderful when you visit and leave me a "nice" review...

Papaya

This poem is gorgeous. I've got to check this Youth thing out.
It's really inspiring some super writing from you.

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

thanks Papaya... I guess sometimes things just strike you... me anyway.. lol... I really appreciate .. read more

8 Years Ago

I will continue. :)

jacob erin-cilberto

really good you are at these love poems...not sappy, just real feelings.

i was reading this thinking of simon and garfunkel..."i was 21 years when i wrote this song, i'm 22 now but i won't be for long/ time hurries on, and the leaves that are green turn to brown"--

i loved that song when i was a freshman in college, and now that is 48 years ago....damn.

thanks for the memories...

j.