Unfinished Poem 4

Unfinished Poem 4

A Chapter by redzone
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Snippets Unfinished Poems 4


roaming through sweet grass
at the edge of the forest,
the sage I burnt last night
lingers on my skin;
its aroma calms me
and soothes the aches in my bones…


© 2016 redzone


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redzone
...thanks for reading..


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I can almost smell incense burning. This is soothing...because poetry is the stuff we thrive on. You caress the senses with your words. Yes, it is "nice", but it is much more. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


I have carry sage with me for 30 years. Sweet glass sage is my favorite. Good description create place and beauty. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


I find poetry can soothe the ache in my bones, very much of late. I love the brevity of your pieces!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This feels soothing to read. Funny how smells have such a strong impact on our disposition...
I'm so glad they've bottled these aromas and sell them as bubble baths. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

scented candles and bubble bath, soft music and the water almost too hot... make sure that pure fant.. read more

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Added on September 28, 2016
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