Keep On Dancing

Keep On Dancing

A Poem by redzone
"

....wanna dance???

"
Keep On Dancing

come a little closer
let me treat you good
the way a man should,
let’s keep on dancing
swing, stop
twirl
into a tight be bop curl

come on baby
hold me close,
move in sync
then drop
never stop
as we dance
swing, twirl
into a tight be bop curl

baby baby,
come dance with me,
let the music swing us free
of closed inhibition;
let the music rock us
rock us
in a rock steady sway.

come baby dance with me
rock, sway
swing, then stop
and twirl
in a tight be bop curl

come baby
let me treat you right
dance me in a rock steady sway
long into the night.

Aztec Warrior/redzone 8.28.16 

© 2016 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
...Thanks for reading...
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Loved these lyrics, Curt. Maybe better than the inspirations words:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

hey Pryde, have you picked out the song you will dance me too once my knee is fixed and I can actual.. read more
I love this & wish I could dance "in a tight be-bop curl" so I could keep up with your magical lead! *smile* The perfect lighthearted fantasy for an otherwise blasé day! *smile* Thanks for sharing! (((HUGS)))

Posted 8 Years Ago


barleygirl

8 Years Ago

That's a great beginning to a poem! The time we danced all night and hobbled all the next day . . . .. read more
redzone

8 Years Ago

tell that mojo to stop hiding and come out and play... ;0) funny it has been dry here lately though .. read more
barleygirl

8 Years Ago

I'm glad you're surrounded by smiles & giggles (((HUGS)))
Bopping along to the music and words in my chair this morning. Dancing...a vertical representation of a horizontal act! :) Loved the happy feel of this one, Curt. Very "nice", Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like this. I love to dance. It's the best feel good activity ever. That and watching funny videos.

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

I kinda thought you liked to dance Ana, those red sneakers were the give away.. lol I was always on .. read more
Papaya

8 Years Ago

:- )
It's got a little rhythm and groove all its own.

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

yep some swing, swirl and dip... Thank you KL...

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Added on August 29, 2016
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