"So Kiss Me"*

"So Kiss Me"*

A Poem by redzone
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...it's Friday night and I love this song

"
“So Kiss Me”*

down by the raging river
under the shade tree
in the middle of the day
            kiss me
under the silver moon light
with fire flies glowing
and dreams danceing
along the milky night
           kiss me
oh oh be my sparkling
forever, whispering sweetly
your lips tasting me
like it was our first
          kiss me
swing swing me into your
guitar-scape melodies
out on the valley green
yellow and wildflower blue
          kiss me
“so kiss me”.... “so kiss me”
more and more
kiss me

Aztec Warrior/redzone 6.24.16
*Note: the title of the song by Katie Melua

© 2016 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
....thanks for reading...



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Pretty expressive of a free and unexposed desire with a true love. Just so neat!...............Kathy

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

thanks Kathy, nice of you to say and thrilled you stopped by to read...
I like how you have a video suited perfectly to each poem.
I liked this one to very sweet little poem.
sounded very poetic. I mean some poems on this sight are meant to be poems but don't sound like poems, where as yours does.
Keep writing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

sometimes I start writing and the song comes into view and sometimes I listen to music an a poem flo.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

I am the same have got allot of inspiration from songs.
Your very much welcome :)
I loved this !! so so good

Posted 8 Years Ago


I think the best thing about this is the imagry used to se the scene for each opportunity for a kiss. Very romantic but also very real. Not cookie cutter but very creative. I love the song as well. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

Thanks JB, I like this song and thought of it when I started to write the poem.. so glad you enjoyed.. read more
Awww!!! This is so cute... I really loved the different moments you have said about kissing... What a wonderful way to put the innocence and sweetness of kissing into words... There is nothing better than a love filled kiss from our beloved... So sweetly done...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

thanks Dhiman for your words and for your stopping by, i appreciate the words and visit...
Nothing as passionate...as urgent...as that first kiss. The one that starts the world spinning, the waves crashing on the shoreline of passion, the silvery man on the moon to smile. The taste of passion flows through this one. The excitement of a new relationship that can last, but often does not. I was swaying with the words, Curt. So very "nice". Great love poem. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

I always love your visits Lydi, yes for the "nice" reviews, but you always add a dimension or two or.. read more
I love the line "lips tasting me" sounds much sexier than "mine" -- one minor suggestion -- not to be adhered to if you do not wish -- perhaps shady would be a better choice than shade, or even shade of the tree -- just rolling with your rhythm here, but maybe you like to stop and change the rhythm up mid stream.;) ps I love this song too -- I am pretty sure I used it on some poem or other, though not so effectively as this piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

thanks KL, it's a good suggestion.... that first stanza is a bit choppy I thought as I wrote it, "sh.. read more
I like the way this isn't so much describing the kiss/kissing, but showing us various different beautiful settings where a kiss would be like the cherry on top of a sundae. I love the idea of being in a relationship/friendship where the natural, logical, spontaneous thing to do is to kiss, rather than talking or otherwise distracting ourselves from a precious lovely moment in time. I'm not familiar with your chosen song, but this reminds me of another song -- just shut up & kiss me! *smile* Kissing takes us away from the cerebral enjoyment of a setting, so we can just soak it in on a sensory level. Great poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


barleygirl

8 Years Ago

I like kisses, too . . . but the ones I get nowadays are mostly from long slurpy tongues around here.. read more
redzone

8 Years Ago

Margie, you nare getting more action than I am... lol so if you kiss me I will gladly wag my tail an.. read more
barleygirl

8 Years Ago

Big smiles (you're adorable & loveable) . . . watching Eric Clapton's Crossroads guitar festival on .. read more
reminds me of someone who made my knees wobble when she kissed me...even the thought of those kisses makes me have to hold on to something, not to fall over.

thanks...

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

here Jacob let me help you up... and happy to help you have such a wonderful remembrance of such a k.. read more
Very romantic words red, I really liked this one.
Good song too.

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

I am so glad you did Papaya, thank you... it is good to see those red high chuckies again, I must ad.. read more
Papaya

8 Years Ago

You're welcome and thanks! :)

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