Odyssey

...a twist on Bowie's "Starman"...

Odyssey

There’s a message riding on the sky

I heard it playing on the radio

and just wanted you to know

it’s a wild song with ebbs and flows

like rock and roll

with lots of boogie and soul.

The message said, come read me slow,

my heart is beating and I want to show

you how to see me in this light,

come and sparkle with me this very night.

Let us walk in a jivvy fantasy,

a hazy cosmic odyssey

where we become, then fade

on time’s wave.

Two children, laughing as we go.

Aztec Warrior / redzone 6.10.16

Author's Note

...thanks for reading... a twist with apologies to David Bowie's "Starman"...

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah, to be young again. To wish upon stars and boogie to soul music with the one you love. Who can resist a stolen kiss under the celestial light? "Cosmic Odyssey".....the trek we all wanted to take in our faded bell bottoms. I can almost see the flowers in my hair! I liked the beat of this one and the line breaks were wonderful. Very "nice", Curt. Seems like I missed a lot of your words. Having fun catching up. Lydi**

[Papaya]

This makes me think of young crazy love.
I like it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this took me back...cosmic thinking...the karma the energy of the late sixties and early seventies...

"far out, man!"