Dancing

Dancing

A Poem by redzone
"

..a reply to a message sent.. and it's Friday

"
Dancing

She wrote saying;
"I fell in love with you
dancing in your poetry"
10 words.

And I reply:
"Dancing with you in poetry,
your words captured my heart"!
10 words

© 2016 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
thanks for reading... Not a sensual, sexy poem this time but still for all the usual suspects, you know who you are.. And it is the beginning of National Poetry Month so write on my friends...


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Dance with the words....would that be a samba or the twist? Hmmm...or a waltz perhaps? May words continue to capture you, my friend. Yes, National Poetry Month is upon us....and it is nice! :) I liked this. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice romantic poem. Good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow curt - didn't know you still have in you that romantic dude you must have been when you were just a boy thinking about your first kiss, your first love - i enjoyed reading the poem - an affectionate connection thru poetry, the power of words shines in this poem

best,
steph

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on April 1, 2016
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