Chaos

Chaos

A Poem by redzone
"

...beauty within chaos...

"
Chaos

chaos reigns
and yet order
from disorder
as a new conversation begins.

it reminds me of something I heard-
“we all are living in the gutter,
yet some of us are looking to the stars”,*
and you say, “huh”?!

well, in the midst
of all the horrors,
all the drones and torture,
all the wars
and planet destruction;
out of all this
resides the possibility
of great and wondrous change.

change where humans
find their beauty,
not perfectly,
but through struggle
create a world
of voluntary associating humanity.

out of all the horrors of today
great beauty can emerge
and isn’t this
“looking at the stars”.

redzone 2.21.16
*quoted lines are from Oscar Wilde

NOTE: in a small café near the Joyce Theater here in NYC, I met 
Leslie and Fred. They had just come from a dance performance
and we struck up a conversation. I wrote this poem and gave it to them.
I also told them that I would mention them when I posted the poem
on line. So, thank you Leslie and Fred, for the conversation and inspiration.

© 2016 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
thanks for reading... enjoy the music...


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I wish I could conjure up such hopefulness, but not today. Maybe there have been too many additional world tragedies since you wrote this. I wonder if you feel this sense of hope regularly, or just in wild-a*s inspired moments. Even if it's not possible to transform the world & humans away from this current tragic path, at least I applaud you for continuing to sing a song of hope. I feel there is no one big answer, but that we must each keep chipping away, adding hopefulness & positivity along the way, transforming one moment at a time, cheering up one person at a time. In these ways, you walk your talk.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i love the subject of universal love, brother to brother, sister to sister , fellow human to fellow human - we all share the same template of sentiments despite the barrier of cultural and historical differences - we all know compassion and kindness and love, one or the other way :)

best,
steph

Posted 8 Years Ago


yes it is sir :) we have quite the history of surviving horrors of all kinds .. i'm a sucker for hope tho ... like your poem ... looking up at the stars ;)
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


All new creation flows from chaos ... wonderful write, Red.

Posted 8 Years Ago


"associating humanity" i am prone to lean that direction...but those damn drones---out of destruction can come reconstruction...we just have to stop the former and embrace the latter.

Posted 8 Years Ago


out of chaos comes optimism -- such is the nature of humanity -- why the children smile over a chocolate bar they take home and share amongst 5 siblings in a shanty hut.

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

exactly KL... it is within us and more within our capablities to create a world where there are no l.. read more
WOW....Leslie and Fred must be amazing people to inspire such a write, Curt! In the midst of all the horrors, I do look at the stars....and some would say I gaze through rose-colored glasses. Life is never quite as bad as it seems and there are always stars twinkling just a tiny bit out of reach. It is the optimist who sees them...and then strives to reach them. I thank Leslie and Fred for shaking these words loose from your mind....these very "nice" words. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


redzone

8 Years Ago

thanks Lydi, the conversation started when Fred was asking Leslie whether it was correct or chaotic .. read more
Lydia Shutter

8 Years Ago

:) Thanks for letting me know "the rest of the story!"

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