Seduction

Seduction

A Poem by redzone
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...Tana drum seduction...

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SEDUCTION

You beat your ‘tana’ drum
with ancient, calloused hands
making it speak relentlessly,
as if you were rain soaked wind
announcing moonless death.
As its beats echo down brown, 
barren rivers,
its crescendo can be heard
crashing through tangled undergrowth
until it reaches the
timeless and continuous sea.
~~~
The ocean has swallowed
millennium of hardships,
where,  on this very spot,
blood flowed freely, soaking
these sands with slavery’s misery.
It was here 
the Great Rock at Toubab Dialaw
was  born.
Born and grew.
                            Grew from endless
emptiness, borne with the 
beating of human flesh. 
It was hacked, torn from limb
and shackled, then
dispersed to distant shores.
Blood, red with agony’s screams,
soaked the sands,
colored the tides,
and choked the air with its
beat, beat, beat, 
beatings and death. 
Blood ran thick with sated flies
and when you looked into their eyes,
all you saw was  bottomless ocean.
Empty
           Yet pulling,
like seduction.
~~~
You beat your ‘tana’ drum
with hardened, calloused hands,
and your rage.
You make it speak seduction,
enticing us to dance on
Toubab Dialaw’s bloody shores,
staring into the bottomless eyes of death.
It is pulling
            pulling,
                      pulling us
into its seduction.
Filling us with your anger,
with your rage;
filling us with your drumming tongue
and the unquenchable thirst for revolution;
for all these wrongs to be undone.

~~redzone 3.21.07

© 2014 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
thanks for reading...
"Truth Don Die"... Femi Kuti...


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The tana drum rumbles incessantly and unflinchingly through this odyssey of blood and injustice...the bottomless ocean feels like an infinite cry of people mistreated in the most horrifying ways...I did attempt a search on Toubab Dialaw but couldn't find much beyond tourist information...perhaps that only proves the point of your words and evocations...but in the end, I required no background history for you seem to have laid it out in a way incapable of being expressed in any history book...such is the role of a poet, especially one like yourself, with amazing depth of vision and understanding...I felt many emotions as I worked my way through this piece...sorrow, rage, shame, horror...and I emerged from it having learned many things I did not know of beforehand...I can't overstate the power of this work and the indelible imprint it will surely leave on many other readers besides myself...well done my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redzone

10 Years Ago

There's a really great film called "Sankofa" that starts in today times. A young Black woman, a mode.. read more
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Where do I begin my friend...I actually don't watch a lot of movies but I will certainly keep this o.. read more



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The tana drum rumbles incessantly and unflinchingly through this odyssey of blood and injustice...the bottomless ocean feels like an infinite cry of people mistreated in the most horrifying ways...I did attempt a search on Toubab Dialaw but couldn't find much beyond tourist information...perhaps that only proves the point of your words and evocations...but in the end, I required no background history for you seem to have laid it out in a way incapable of being expressed in any history book...such is the role of a poet, especially one like yourself, with amazing depth of vision and understanding...I felt many emotions as I worked my way through this piece...sorrow, rage, shame, horror...and I emerged from it having learned many things I did not know of beforehand...I can't overstate the power of this work and the indelible imprint it will surely leave on many other readers besides myself...well done my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redzone

10 Years Ago

There's a really great film called "Sankofa" that starts in today times. A young Black woman, a mode.. read more
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Where do I begin my friend...I actually don't watch a lot of movies but I will certainly keep this o.. read more

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