Vodka Dreams

This ones for you Frieda....HA!

Vodka Dreams

I dreamt I was a blue cheese filled olive.
Stuck on a toothpick,
placed in a glass,
washed,
swirled,
and swizzled gently
with Vodka.
I was savored,
then swallowed whole
lovingly, as I tickled my way
down your welcoming throat.

I was loved!

And I did my best
to capture the love in your heart
and ease your pain.
I did my best
to make you happy!

~~redzone 6/28/14

Author's Note

...thanks for reading..
Thanks Frieda, I hope you do not mind my writing about your "very dirty blue cheese martini"... I even put one of those umbrella thingies in it... HA

Captcha: unrecked..

Reviews

[Ivory]

I am impressed. This is a wonderful piece. Very creative and imaginative!

[redzone]

Thanks Ivory, it was fun to write and dare I say, Tasty!! HA..

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Whaaaaaaaaaaaaat??!

O...M...G...

I should thank Friedalicious... what a delectable write! ;)

First of all, I LOVE vodka.. second, I enjoy... a great olive... lol

The pairing of your dirty martini is delish!... I'll have another please...

A Playful little teaser... NICELY DONE!~xoxo~:)

[redzone]

Who said i was playing?? er.. i mean yes thank Frieda it's all her fault .. I'm innocent of everything for explanation see my note to Lydi below .. lol ;0)

[Lydia Shutter]

OH MY.....imagine the possibilities this ones conjures! An olive sliding down her throat...and one stuffed with blue cheese. A culinary and a sensual reference all at once....or is it just me? :) Yes, that olive would be savored and loved, but soon it would be devoured. Love does that sometimes, does it not? Sometimes the best is not good enough and when that is the case, well, it's time to pour another martini! What a great metaphor. Thank Frieda for inspiring it and thank you for writing this "nice" poem. Lydi**

[redzone]

Sensual write?? .. me??? To Frieda??!! er Lydi if i admitted this Frieda would send that Gio fellow to break me knees .. she's a NJ girl and i ain't admitting nothing .. i will keep my heart and my knees, thank you very much .. lol ;0)
Glad you liked my martini, shaken and stirred

[jacob erin-cilberto]

shaken a little bit, emotions not completely stirred, just slightly....but i can only hope it was enough, it was the best i had.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Who knew Frieda could be o inspiring, LOL
This great use of metaphors, awesome work.

[Frieda P]

O-M-G!! Ha, I think I'm gonna faint!!! You're too funny Curt....hope that toothpick didn't hurt too muchly, and you ARE LOVED sweetie! Cheers! Mwah! :) xoxo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Look at you Frieda, being someone muse. Who knew? LOL

[redzone]

Oh stop, you love her too!! LOL But i won't tell if you don't sssshhhh!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes shhh lets keep it our little secret and hope she is not listening in.

[Pryde Foltz]

Make that vodka Bombay Gin and you got a dirty, melancholic martini and a date, as in companionship of the opposite sex, not the dried fruit … that would be disgusting:)

get it … blue, blue.

[redzone]

er.. Pryde, think i can have all three .. the date and date and melancolic.. and its jet blue to Bombay (Mumbai ).. there's an adventure for ya ..lol

[Pryde Foltz]

Haha … book the tickets:)