Words As A Jazzy Breeze

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WORDS AS A JAZZY BREEZE

Words 

often remind me of a spring day-

sunny, sassy

with a jazzy breeze

that gives your hair reason

to be wild and free.

Your words

caress, run teasingly over my lips

like a smooth

yet energetic, Pinot Noir

and goes skipping through my head.

Words,

they follow me everywhere

as I listen,

give you time

to arrange them in my mind.

They are a puzzle to unwind,

I taste their surprises

for their contours

and how they fit,

oddly at times.

They provide detours

or distractions,

but bring me to delicious abstractions.

They bring me to thoughts;

my thoughts, your thoughts,

or more-

conversations.

Words often remind me of a spring day-

sunny and sassy

with that wild hair,

jazzy breeze.

They remind me of conversations

under a shade tree;

a verbal picnic

overlooking a rolling hill

and holding hands.

Touching, savoring, enjoying

words

thoughts

conversation,

all coming easily

on a sassy, sunny

spring breeze.

~~redzone 7.3.07

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Sassy words....like a breeze allowing the gauze of my skirt to brush against my tanned legs. Jazzy and pulsating...they throb to the beat of summer....they entice and they seduce. Indeed, a verbal picnic....one that sates my appetite time and again. Your words, Curt....they never disappoint. Wonderful work! Oh, and "nice" too! Lydi**

[redzone]

LYDI I HAVE MISSED YOU and of course your "nice" comments ... thanks!

[s y e]

You're so smart and creative my little "too young for me" buddy. I agree with what everyone else has said here and I couldn't have said much better myself. Beautiful my friend!

[Frieda P]

You gave more than my hair reason to be wild and free Curt. Am in love with your verbal picnic, as always your words touch my poetic soul. Missed you heaps! x

[redzone]

Thanks Frieda for your Sweet comment. I have and continue to miss you as well. Hugs xx

[just Penny]

words are, as you say so very well...
"a puzzle to unwind,
I taste their surprises
for their contours
and how they fit,
oddly at times"
The power of language, a blessing and a curse at times. Beautifully done, Redzone. Penny

[willweb]

This was extremely good. I enjoyed reading this poem today. It is very creative.

[Sami Khalil]

Your words of romance are really as a jazzy breeze of spring thoughts and your conversations with your beloved are really the sunny whispers of savoring...Excellent...:)........................

[redzone]

Awww Sami, thanks.. you are way too kind to my writings.... it takes me awhile til I can get them to quiet down and back into my notebook.. not complaining, it's fun to watch their excitement... anyway, thanks muchly...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)..........................