A Kiss #8 (Baby It's You)

.... sorry, but it is Friday....

KISS #8 (Baby It’s you)

“It's not the way you smile that touched my heart.

It's not the way you kissed that tears me apart…

What can I do?

Don't want nobody, nobody

Cause, baby, it's you.

Sha la la la la la la

Baby, it's you.”

~~written by Bacharach/David/Williams and sung by The Shirelles

I wonder,

would you know a poem written 

was meant for you?

would you see inside the lines

a heart,

enamored, flustered,

yet singing a star-dust tune

floating continuously

dripping with solar flares

the endless possibilities

desired dreams of 

human potential

discovered within a comet’s tail?

or see the way moonlight

whispers to wild flowers

growing boldly in an open field,

a promise held in a moon glow kiss.

and yet the only reason would simply be,

“cause baby it’s you

sha la la la la la la

can’t help myself

cause baby it’s you….”

~~redzone~~

Author's Note

thanks for reading...

Reviews

[Stephen]

Ah! Yeah .. I know the feelings of Fridays nights .. like la la la la la la la ... lol .. I admire this beautiful poem .. the feelings of yours about love`s pretty good and I freaking appreciated it indeed with the bottom of my heart. It`s an excellent poem.

So .. you got it .. 10/10 .. Stay blessed!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good song. I like the flow of thoughts allowing the reader to fall into the good words. Hard to create music. The words must flow with voice and meaning. You did. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry and song.
Coyote

[redzone]

Thanks Coyote, both for reading and for a wonderful review. I was listening to this song and wrote around it. I'm glad you felt it fit with the song. Especially since the poem is more an invite because of who she is while the song more around loving someone inspite of.. anyway thanks again Coyote

[redzone]

Thanks Coyote, both for reading and for a wonderful review. I was listening to this song and wrote around it. I'm glad you felt it fit with the song. Especially since the poem is more an invite because of who she is while the song more around loving someone inspite of.. anyway thanks again Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[s y e]

Dude you're knocking us girls/woman off our feet, this is marvellous. Everything about it was perfect, loved the wording and the emotion.

[redzone]

here bumblenoodle, let me help you up.. er... you know, your comments are better than any tea, so... thanks sye...

[s y e]

Ha, thanks for the helping hand. ;-) It's always a pleasure.