Too Many Words

....sometimes it's hard to know what words to use..

TOO MANY WORDS

tonight there are too many words.

they cram into all my empty spaces

leaving no room for thoughts;

for thinking about - you.

they bubble

boil

ransack

every time I get close to a

rational

conscious

spontaneously

extroverted (where did this come from?)

sentence.

mostly there is just this -

doubt

and, 

what red do you want!

why is it

these words form

the most coherent thought?

agnostically

ironic

irony

of delusioned

illusioned

bliss - go figure!

perhaps if there were less words

I might be able to arrange them,

make a list,

state

or utter

a reasoned

responsible 

reply 

to this query .

alas,

oh well,

anyway,

er.... 

what did he just say?

I miss you.

there, 

I said,

he said,

they said

it

is

said -

too many words

and none

beat with the longing

found in my heart.

~~redzone 4.6.14

   

Author's Note

thanks for reading...

Reviews

[just Penny]

I read this out loud and it works so well orally. The perfect soliloquy, where musing over what to say, think, do are all explored and exposed. It's sometimes hard to find the most fitting things to say and often the more we rationalise, the harder it gets. I love the way you concluded this and "none beat with the longing found in my heart". Beautiful. Penny

[MAC]

Oh this is brilliant....had me smiling and nodding my big ole noggin like mad. What a pleasure to meet you and read you.

[MsJewel]

I know this feeling well, to struggle to find the right words...
You have said it beautifully....

:) Julie

[TheSecretWriter]

Not easy to read or understand but as soon as you get behind what you wanted to depict you see this wonderful and lovely meaning that shows how much you know this feeling. You exactly caught the feeling and wrote it down in the most perfect matter for this case.
LG The Secret Writer

[redzone]

I think you caught the frustration of words sometimes... of not knowing what or how to say what in on your mind (well my mind anyway)... glad you liked it LG, thanks

[Sami Khalil]

"too many words

and none

beat with the longing

found in my heart."

You are so right. Spontaneity comes natural to so many people and in love it is tempered with longing. Excellent...:)......