'OOH How I Love You'

'OOH How I Love You'

A Poem by redzone
"

the Moody Blues: a taste of my Romantically/Impressionist aspects...

"

 

 

 

"Oooh How I Love You"*

 

‘Nights In White Satin’*

the song and words

play wishfully

in my head,

soaring me into my

romantic and impressionist

aspect of life.

~~~

‘Letters I’ve written

never meaning to send..’*

Yes, so much unsaid;

words, songs

would fill days and days,

leaving only nights in silence.

Why do most of us live in the dark?

~~~

‘Beauty I’ve always missed

with these eyes before..’*

Often we fail to see

the possibilities,

the vast potential

of beauty and life

as it teems throughout the universe,

and within.

Blinded by the way things are,

but also by fear

and doubt.

~~~

‘Lovely to see you again my friend

won’t you walk with me to the next bend’**

Come, give me your hand

let’s stroll this beach of time.

With its shifting sand,

life is complex emotion;

demons lurk,

hidden behind wave soaked rocks.

But so does the thrill

of chasing and kicking

ebbing and flowing waves;

giggling at the sudsy foam

made with all our words spoken..

~~~

‘Nights in white satin

never reaching the end..’

Come, let me hold your hands,

see your cheeks dimple

when you smile.

Let this be the letter

I’m sending...

Cause -

‘ooh how I love you’*

 

~~~redzone 1.24.14

 

* these are lines from the Moody Blues song

"Nights In White Satin

** this is a line from the Moody Blues album

"On The Threshold of A Dream"

 

NOTE: credit for this poem must be given to Frieda.

The other day she wrote a lovely, romantic poem with

"Nights In White Satin" embedded within.

I love this song, and have appreciated the artistry

of the Moody Blues forever. Their album

"Days Of Future Past" remains one of my most favorite.

So, thank you Frieda, for the inspiration (poem and music).

© 2014 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
disclaimer: this song does me in, makes me sing naked while running down the street, makes me see the way things could be, makes me write this poem... sheesh and all I wanted to do was change the world!!

captcha: zupanate... well I have my own captcha.. ZOOOOM ;o)

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I swear that song was written for artists...I can't thank of many others that have inspired so much art in so many forms over the years haha Wonderful adaptation and a lovely work in its own right.

Posted 10 Years Ago


One of my favorite songs of all time Curt. You have transpired these lyrics into another beautiful masterpiece. Your poem is lovely!

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


i never had that experience But i have listened to it for years wondering what hold this band had on me. Then it hit me they are more like an orchestra of rock. Like the trans siberian band

Posted 10 Years Ago


redzone

10 Years Ago

hi Tate.. will have to travel over to read some of yours..
Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

Thank you That would be nice of you
Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

I have a penchant for music as well
One of your best dear poet. I enjoyed it tremendously...:).......................

Posted 10 Years Ago


redzone

10 Years Ago

thanks Sami... I like it too, even as I was writing, I was singing.. that doesn't always happen...
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

That is so good...You are welcome...:)...................
Omg curt, be still my heart. I love this with my whole entire heart...you've given the Moody's words a new charm'd heartbeat and delightful significance. Every verse, every stanza sent me reeling, albeit not running naked dancing in the streets, but that's a thought....I just wanted to lose control in the essence of your words, simply captivating, sigh..........sigh.........sigh and to think I was part of this inspiration, I might quite literally pass out now.

100 beats of my heart

Posted 10 Years Ago


redzone

10 Years Ago

Oooooh good come back .. ;0) I still love you, you can be on top. No cobblestone burns on you hiney.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Seriously it was banned, that's too funny....
redzone

10 Years Ago

It was .. funny .. her parents and mine thought she and I and all our guests would immediately run o.. read more
Oh, this is a wonderful song....always has mesmerized me. I can remember singing it at the top of my lungs with my friends while driving down Collins Avenue in Miami Beach. Never did sing it naked while running down the street, though. You took it to a higher level. :) Love....makes people do things they didn't even know they could and makes them imagine everything is possible. "Come, give me your hand let’s stroll this beach of time." Oh, yes, that is an invitation I would accept in a New York minute..or a New Jersey one as the case may be. In any case, it is difficult to believe any "lonely man cries for love, but has none" while listening to this song. Your poetry is so very lacy and flows beautifully into the lines of the Moody Blues song. So, my friend, my advice is, "Breathe Deep!" Very "nice" Curt! Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


redzone

10 Years Ago

aaah Lydi, I am glad you liked this.. somehow I knew you would know every word to the Moody Blues so.. read more

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