Girl, You Turn Me

Girl, You Turn Me

A Poem by redzone
"

love this song... spinning round and round..

"

 

 

 

Girl You Turn Me

 

"Upside down

girl, you turn me

inside out and

round and round"*

 

Song: "Upside Down"

by Diana Ross - 1990

*(I changed the original

‘boy’ to girl )

^^^

This winter solstice holds us tightly

in its swirling white,

griping us even as we

travel toward perihelion

and the unfolding of

regenerative life.

^^^

I love these early morning walks.

The crisp clarity of icy air

paints our breath words visibly

as they flow in shared conversation,

while the last of the stars wink and flirt

with the approaching light.

^^^

As we walk,

hands entwine in warmth’s touch,

we enjoy our uniqueness

while embracing our creativity.

You turn, smile and

I fall willingly into your life hungry eyes.

^^^

I love these early morning walks

greeting the rising sun.

They are filled with possibilities;

filled with the wildness of your solar flares;

filled with my light speed

desires to be with you.

 

                          ~~~ redzone 1.21.14

© 2014 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
hope you like... still spinning...

captcha: scyphae... right on the money if this has anything to do with inside out or upside...

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I love these early morning walks
greeting the rising sun.
They are filled with possibilities;
filled with the wildness of your solar flares;
filled with my light speed
desires to be with you.

Pretty awesome write. I love its understated romance.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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