Sounds

Sounds

A Poem by redzone
"

sometimes you feel "snowy"..

"

Sounds

 

Sometimes I think love

is the sound of violins

vibrating the colors of Autumn leaves,

exciting their last pallet sighs

before winter sets in.

 

Or the sound a field of

mountain wild flowers makes

as a breeze brings them

the morning sun

 

Maybe it’s the sound made

by the motion needed

to elicit the melody of

Chopin’s Nocturne #9;

the piano beating your heart

to its serpentine ambitions.

 

I think it might also

be the sound you make

as my fingers gently comb

stray hairs behind your ear.

 

But

I mostly believe love

is the sound of silence

after a scream.

 

      ~~~ redzone 1.22.14

© 2014 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
and sometimes the sound is hollow...

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Love is music to the ears , melody to the soul , breeze to the senses. That is what I get from this wonderful write...:).....................

Posted 10 Years Ago


redzone

10 Years Ago

thanks Sami, appreciate your take on this poem.. was kinda lonely when I wrote it.. glad you enjoyed.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)......................
This is a really powerful and beautiful poem. ^-^

Posted 10 Years Ago


redzone

10 Years Ago

Thank you Brittany for the great reviw.. I am glad that you enjoyed reading it... be well, ~~redzon.. read more

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Added on January 22, 2014
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