She Drives Me Crazy

She Drives Me Crazy

A Poem by redzone
"

there is crazy, and then there is CRAZY!!!

"

 

 

 

 

 

She Drives Me Crazy

"She drives me crazy

like noone else

She drives me crazy

and I can’t help myself"

~~ Fine Young Cannibals

(from the album ‘The Cooked and the Raw)

***

She drives me crazy

and I can’t help but write this;

tell my side of the story,

maybe you will side with me.

I need help

cause she drives me to

want to hide within wind blown hues;

no, not her eyes,

from the picture,

they seem darker,

more brown

or a midnight green.

In any case I know

I could get lost within.

***

She calls herself

F-A-P

and she writes poetry,

the kind that either

melts your heart

with apricot sighs,

or makes you wanna cry.

Yet, she says she is

batshyte crazy!

Maybe,

cause the other day

she said she would get

all of ‘Joisey’ after my tail.

Now, I’m not one to back down

so I said, ‘Bring it on

I’m waiting downtown.’

***

So here I am - waiting,

thinking I’m in too deep.

I need help

can’t you see,

cause she drives me crazy.

~~redzone 1.15.14

© 2014 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
written for a friend here at WC. I hope she doesn't mind cause else all her 'Joisey' friends and others might come looking for me... ;o)
hmmm captcha: 'producer'???? of what, craziness...yep!!

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Now I am sure this is about my Joisey goil friend, Frieda...and just as sure she will adore every word of it. That song by the fine young Cannibals is one of my favorite songs from the 80's.You know what they say, Curt? “Focking over a Joisey girl may not kill you...but there will be a point where you wish it would!” Yo...fuggedaboudit. Can we have cawfee and tawk about this situation latah? It’s true, Frieda’s apricot sighs are something no one can forget after reading one of her ultra romantic poems. If you get lost in her eyes, gimme a call....I will have the Vinnie the enforcer help you outta there! Curt, this rocks! Frieda will be “jazzed!” :) Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Haha whatevah....hope you look good in red hon ;-)
Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Absophuckinlutely...to match my nails and lips! LOL
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Good thing Lydikey otherwise I'd have to tell you to suck it up buttercup LOL



Reviews

so much fun, love the responses to this as well, being a former Bronxer....

ova thea, joisey--dats da one...

and i agree with lydi on the song...not much from the 80's i could call really good music...but alas, the fine young cannibals...great song and video.

and i like the way you played off of it, redzone.

Posted 10 Years Ago


OMG I'm laughing so hard tears are running down my face! Ha, dancing too, since you reminded me that song now...hahahaha, you're so bad, and Lydikey's review is just as funky...you guys....hahah still laughing I LOVE YOU CURT WILL YOU MARRY ME? You have to say yes or Zio Luigi will break your knee caps....Saturday, don't be late. ;-) MWAH!!!!!! ♥♥

100 wedding guests

Posted 10 Years Ago


Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Rest up for Saturday, gonna be a lot of dancing and boozin', night~~
Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

I am ready, willing, and able! :)
redzone

10 Years Ago

Frieda you better tell me where this bowling alley is. Other wise one of us will be broken hearted. .. read more
Now I am sure this is about my Joisey goil friend, Frieda...and just as sure she will adore every word of it. That song by the fine young Cannibals is one of my favorite songs from the 80's.You know what they say, Curt? “Focking over a Joisey girl may not kill you...but there will be a point where you wish it would!” Yo...fuggedaboudit. Can we have cawfee and tawk about this situation latah? It’s true, Frieda’s apricot sighs are something no one can forget after reading one of her ultra romantic poems. If you get lost in her eyes, gimme a call....I will have the Vinnie the enforcer help you outta there! Curt, this rocks! Frieda will be “jazzed!” :) Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Haha whatevah....hope you look good in red hon ;-)
Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Absophuckinlutely...to match my nails and lips! LOL
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Good thing Lydikey otherwise I'd have to tell you to suck it up buttercup LOL

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