"HI"

..what if...

HI

Apricot scented skin entices

as you near and smile.

Smiling back,

a fluttering heart

beats,

anticipating

the closeness of your touch

and flickering

sky blue eyes.

~~~

As silver beams fade

into yellow light,

shadows evaporate, and

maybe this will be the day

you turn and say,

"Hi".

                           ~~redzone 12.13.13

Author's Note

thanks for reading...
wtf??? captcha: ceratosa (my mind is boggled, no thats the meaning..er.. honest.. ok maybe not, but... Pryde, this is all your fault, getting me interested in the meaning of THE Captcha!!)

Reviews

[Frieda P]

HI, I was all excited til I got to the blue eyes, thought you meant me, bummer...hearing Carly Simon singing in the background here curt.

"cause these are the good old days"..........

Adore that opener by the way, 'Apricot scented skin entices' it's deliciously inviting.

[redzone]

I can change the color Frieda, I can change it.. dag ;0) (if you tell me the next one will be about you) now there will be lots of material for those "alligator" moments.. ok I will behave, thanks for liking "apricot scents" ..

[Sami Khalil]

This was sooo good and romantic. It is truly indeed that shadows disappear when you are close to your beloved...Great job...:)...............

[:o]

The anticipation of a connection in any way can be quite a ride. You never know where it's going to go and if it even is.

[Pryde Foltz]

Hahaha. Well, skin is in the first line. Capcha knows. A very romantic and effective write. Insert sigh ...

[Lydia Shutter]

The anticipation....the thrill of possibility. Never know when someone will actually start a conversation. Thing is, why wait for the shadows to evaporate? Why not say "HI" first in those shadows? One never knows what will happen next. The expectant nature of your words is wonderful and the imagery is great. There is almost an innocence this one, Curt....well, almost! Still, it is "nice". :) Lydi**