A Thought In Endless Time

A Thought In Endless Time

A Poem by redzone
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some more fantasy..

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A THOUGHT IN ENDLESS TIME

 

she came as a thought

carried hauntingly on a floral mix

of lilac and jasmine.

she was as bright as dawn

as her waves of purple

splashed across the shore

in endless tides;

as she crashed into me

as I lay on early morning sand.

she tickled my skin

in a salt water sway

lapping me with liquid thighs,

arching my back in penetrating greetings,

panting my breath in release;

turning me into satiated thought,

covering me with her spatial aura

and endless time.

 

~~redzone 3.31.06

© 2013 redzone


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redzone
thanks for reading and crits are welcome

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"she tickled my skin in a salt water sway lapping me with liquid thighs" such a sensual image here....this poem had me riding the waves of fantasy and inhaling the aroma of blossoms. Curt, this is romance as it should be written. I am so pleased you are posting some of your older poems....I remember how wonderful they were! Lydi**


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