Wrong Love

Wrong Love

A Poem by RedWriter
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Just a short note about feelings Im having

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It's a weird feeling, wrong either way.

I should avoid it, let it pass.

I cannot let it stay.


It's a sweet sensation the way it trickles down me.

In the most sincere way he intrigue's me, excites me, he makes me want to change.

It's bad to feel this good, Im sad to say.


Unexplainable, but no reason for this to be.

I don't know him, he doesn't know me.


What will I do? I have no control. 

The smile he creates from the devil it was stole.

© 2014 RedWriter


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Temptation is strong. This gave a different point of view on this concept of love.
Resisting.
I liked it.
Nice pen (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


RedWriter

10 Years Ago

Thank you! This is one of my favorite comments. I appreciate the read :)
"What will I do? I have no control.

The smile he creates from the devil it was stole."

You asked a good question. Bravo...............



Posted 10 Years Ago


RedWriter

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...........................
:D Almost everyone knows this feeling ! It is just so honest and i can relate to it ! Good job done here :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


RedWriter

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
Hope

10 Years Ago

you are welcome :)

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