See Me

Tolerance is learned, so my agony is maintained.

Looks are made and can forever change.

But my soul is a story that my eyes contain.

Reviews

[Hope]

That's less..but more ! I'd suggest you write a bit more because what you wrote leaves the reader wanting for more ! Good job till here :)

[RedWriter]

Yes you are right. I have a lot of stuff that is short. Once I lose the feeling for what I am working on I have to wait till it comes back to finish. I hate to force words because it never sounds good. Sometimes is 20 minutes and sometimes it is a year before I am able to finish. Thank you for the review.

[Hope]

you are most welcome ! :)