Heart of the Moon

Hello, readers!

I'm glad you decided to read a little. ^^ I would really love your suggestions, critics and feelings for this. So, here are few things that I want you look for and help me! :)

• Is the tense correct?

• Is the grammer okay? Including punctuation marks?

• Does the scene and sentences make sense? Please do specify that doesn't make an image in your mind. I sometimes write that only make sense to me.

• Vocabulary? what you liked? how much it captured you? It would definitely help me to know if I have missed something.

Thankyou so much for the effort and your kind help! ^^

Enjoy Reading!