destiny

dews gathering strength

weighing down the blades of grass

waiting perfect fall.

Reviews

[Elandra]

I love haiku - when it is done well. And you managed to do exactly that. Such simplicity and calmness - the flow of the words gives the reader a tranquil feeling. And since I must always be petty, "dews" so actually have an apostrophe since I think you mean "dew is". The best part of this piece was "perfect fall". Such a sense of completion, carrying out its destiny... loved it!

[mae-mae<3]

This is pretty. Simplicity often has it's way with making a great poem.