RESPONSIBILITY

RESPONSIBILITY

A Poem by mhaie

Having your responsibility play
is good virtue.
But having your responsibility work
and having it with play
is somewhat loosing virtue simultaneously.

© 2013 mhaie


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Remarkable verses with powerful message. Great piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Responsibility is a choice given to you to perform. So, it's up to you if you'll doing it well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I generally don't like poems long and drawn out nature, but this one was great. It got its point across quick and well. Really well written

Posted 11 Years Ago


mhaie

11 Years Ago

Ah. me too! anyway, thanks for the review.
short but meaningful..
"responsibilities need to be done and learn at the same time"
pretty good...

Posted 11 Years Ago


mhaie

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Short but full of meaning. I loved it, great work!
~Tasha

Posted 11 Years Ago


mhaie

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot!
 Tasha

11 Years Ago

No problem!

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Added on February 9, 2013
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mhaie
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Ligao, V, Philippines



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