Dear Time... I Miss You.

Dear Time... I Miss You.

A Poem by Red Rose
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confessions of a 15 year old. written last year.

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It's hitting me. I'm getting old.
I'm turning 16 next month.
I'm getting my drivers license soon.
I've taken the ACT for the first time.
The kids I babysit call me "ma'am".
...and worst of all-
My previously lime green walls are now beige.

Time soars.

© 2010 Red Rose


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Very funny. Nice to see humorous poems which don't get posted often.

Posted 9 Years Ago


lol! nice

Posted 14 Years Ago


I laughed at this - very cute, sweet and short. I actually think you could do without the "Time soars" line at the end. While this line might feel a little more conclusive, or whatnot, I feel that it interrupts the kind of thoughts the writer is trying to convey.
//...and worst of all-
My previously lime green walls are now beige.//
Besides, the above two lines were by far my favourite - it would be an interesting little remark to end the poem with.
Overall, nothing spectacular or revolutionary, but sweetly written.
9.4/10



Posted 14 Years Ago


haha.
Wonderful.
Absolutely wonderful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Haha that was cute:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ha ha this one make me laugh.

Good write.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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